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Band 4+: Tile maps show a shopping center in 1985 and in 2005.

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The image shows a shopping center layout for two years, 1985 and 2005. In 1985, it features: a department store, women's clothing, bookstore, sporting goods, bank, food court with food stalls, six cinemas, video shop, card shop, gift shop, jewelry shop, and a fountain in the north courtyard. In 2005, changes include the replacement of the bookstore with vacant space, the addition of a café near the previous cinema 1, reduction of cinemas to three, the conversion of the video shop to electronics, and reallocation of food stalls to a single stall. The jewelery shop, card shop, women's clothing, bank, and department store remain unchanged.

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Tile map illustrate a shopping mall between 1985 and 2005.

Overall,the shopping center has undergone significant redevelopment.Several new retail outlets have been added,while some existing facilities have been removed or replaced.The food cort appears more commercialised than befor.

In 2005,western side of the building contained a department store,with women’sclothing located nearby.Electronics and sporting good stores were also situated in this section.In the center food zone and cafe were positioned towards the eastem side.

At present ,the department store remains but appears to have been expanded.The countryard has been expanded.the countryard has beenredesigned and now includes a fountain.Several new shops,such as books,ahoes and a jewellery store,have beev introduced.The cafe has been removed,and the plaza has been enlarged.Additionally,the number of smaller retail units has increased significantly along the eastern side of the center.

Overall,the shopping center has become larger and more compared to its 2005 layout.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the changes in the shopping center layout between 1985 and 2005, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks specific details. The organization is not clear, and there are issues with tense consistency and descriptive language. To improve, focus on accurately representing the information from the tile maps, providing specific details, and organizing the report in a clear and logical manner. Also, ensure correct tense usage and descriptive language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The overview is present but could be more insightful. The body paragraphs lack clear connections, making it difficult to follow the changes between 1985 and 2005. Improve the flow by using cohesive devices more effectively and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to describe the changes effectively. There is some repetition of words like 'expanded' and 'new.' To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to retail and spatial descriptions. For example, instead of 'expanded,' consider using 'enlarged,' 'extended,' or 'renovated.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('Tile map illustrate'), missing articles ('food cort appears'), incorrect word forms ('eastern side'), and punctuation errors. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on correcting basic grammatical errors and practice using a wider range of sentence structures. Proofread carefully to catch errors before submission.

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