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Band 5+: Using the visual data, write a Performance Quality Report (PQR) on students' progress after using Perfamica. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph with a y-axis for KPIs (%) ranging from 0 to 100 and an x-axis for Months from September to December, tracking three metrics: Average grade, Goal achievement, and Peer feedback quality. For Average grade, the data points are: September 70%, October 76%, November 78%, and December 85%. For Goal achievement, the points are: September 58%, October 72%, November 74%, and December 75%. For Peer feedback quality, the points are: September 60%, October 65%, November 90%, and December 82%.

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The graph provide the information about the performance quality report (PQR) by using visual data from the month of september to december.

Overall the average grade and goal achievement group are increase in a numbers, while peer feedback quality is flustrated.

Average grade is increase with approximately 2 to 3 percent to on the stage of 78% from the month of september to october, however it increase in only 1% in the month of november but in december it cross the number of 80 percent.

Goal achievement group is started from mean line 59% in the month of september, rapidly it goes to the approximatly 76% in the one month. However from the month of october to december it increase only 1%.

Peer feedback quality is increase only 1% to reach approximately 62% from september to october, but in november it increase suddenly to reach a maximum of 95%. after the november it again go down to the approximately the limit of 78% in the month of december.

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month: 7

increase: 6

september: 4

quality: 3

approximately: 3

october: 3

november: 3

december: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the trends in the three metrics over the four months. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., misreporting percentages and trends) and some unclear phrasing (e.g., 'flustrated', 'mean line'). To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the description is clear and precise. Also, consider structuring the report with a clear overview and then detailed paragraphs for each metric, using appropriate academic language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for each metric. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'flustrated' instead of 'fluctuated', 'increase in only 1%' without clear context). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each sentence logically connects to the next. Also, avoid vague terms like 'approximately' and 'about' when exact data is available.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are several word choice errors (e.g., 'flustrated' instead of 'fluctuated', 'cross the number' instead of 'exceed', 'mean line' instead of 'starting point'). The report would benefit from using more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'showed a steady increase', 'peaked at', 'experienced a sharp rise', and 'declined to'. Avoid informal or incorrect expressions and aim for a more formal, academic tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'The graph provide' should be 'The graph provides', 'from the month of september to december' should be 'from September to December' (with capital letters), and 'increase in a numbers' is incorrect. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. To improve, focus on writing grammatically correct sentences, using a variety of complex structures, and proofreading for errors. Pay attention to capitalization and punctuation as well.

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