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Band 5+: write a letter to a cousin asking for help with shopping and organising wedding plna s

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Dear Arnat, Jo’p

Hope you are splendidly! I am chuffed to tell you that your buddy is going to get hitty next month. You know me, I am little messy in organizing things specifically in shopping. My chaly situation makes everything difficult. Maybe, I need my charm to help me out.

Following that, I am thinking of flaunting attires and beautiful decoration within affordable budget. Your guidance is must as to be two hands makes blast. I need your assistance in selecting my jewelry, outfits and most importantly I make-up artist. I am pretty sure you can handle everything just like a magic!

Let me know when you are free to hang out. We will fix a date and time at our favourite cafe Butler & Cup.

Can’t wait to meet my childhood cousin.

Cheers,

Rafd

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter successfully addresses the task by clearly conveying the request for help with wedding planning and shopping. However, the overall clarity could be improved. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow and organization could be significantly improved for better clarity and readability. The structure and paragraphing need improvement.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite informal and contains some unusual word choices. While it demonstrates a range of vocabulary, more precise and formal language would be beneficial for this type of letter.

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The letter contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect the overall clarity and coherence. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality of the letter.

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