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Band 6+: Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got danaged. Apologize for damaging the product. Explain what happened and say how are you going to fix the issue.

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Dear Sam,

I am writing to you regarding the Samsung laptop I borrowed from you last Wednesday on the 10th of the August is broken down yesterday during the cleaning of my study room. I sincerely apologize for the damage and assuring you for the proper fix before returning it to you.

Upon completion of my homework, I decided to clean the study table and put extra things away. While cleaning and moving things off the desk laptop slipped from my hand and fallen on the ground. However, the laptop is still in working condition apart from LCD screen. Display is blurred which making it hard to visible anything on it. Moreover, there are some scratches on the backside. As a result, I have made an appointment with technician by tomorrow morning in Brampton downtown.

As soon as damage is fixed, I will return it to you. I hope you do not need it urgently. I will look forward to your prompt response to the situation.

Best wishes,

John

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
laptop: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the explanation could be more detailed and clearer.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5
The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5
There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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