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Band 5+: Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?

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Dear Ahmad,

How are you? I hope everything is going well and you are good in health. Recently I heard you are looking for a part-time appointment, I have a friend who he become a manager in one of the Restaurants close to your campus and he still looking for staff , especially part-time. In my viewpoint, this position is good for you.

The duties are easy suck as being the waiter and stand up in front of the Cafe and show your menu to a large number of the community and then explain them regarding your menu.

From my perspective, this is good for you because I know you have great skills with the tourism place. That is why, I just inform you that you can do it on this occasion be nice. and I believe you have many experience with this activity like handling foreigners. And don’t worry about the schedule because the Manager will make sure you work under the company.

If you need more information about this job you can send your CV to the Manager of Restaurant by Email.

I hope you will look forward towards this. Good luck!

Best regards,

Aji

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

manager: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the description of the job and reasons for suitability could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some organizational and grammatical issues affect the overall flow and clarity.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated language would improve the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies are present and detract from the overall quality. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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