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Band 5+: Write a Letter to A Friend Who Just Moved Into a New House to Which You Are Sending a Gift. In your Letter • What Is the Gift? • Why Did You Choose It? • How It Will Be Delivered?

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Hi Giang,

I’m so pleased to hear that you just moved into a new house. I just sent you a small gift to congratulate you on your new home. They are two pots of lucky bamboo plants. I hope you will be happy to receive it.

I chose these plants because I think they will help you bring more luck and fortune to you. Moreover, as you keep plants in your living room, they will make your room greener, cooler, and more comfortable when you look at them.

I sent it yesterday by bus; you will receive it tomorrow. I have arranged for someone to deliver it to your house. I hope you will be happy to see them.

All the best,

Thao Giang

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in the clarity and detail of the response would elevate it. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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5.5

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The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would add sophistication.

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