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Band 4+: Write a letter to hotel manager you stayed at hotel to attend a company meeting and you were dissatisfied with your stay

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Dear sir/Madam,

My name is Sana.am a working as a manager in mutinational company.

Last month 21 august i was boked a roon for company meeting .i asked about all hotel services and you assured me hotel provided a good accomandation as well as high level internet service for metting but unfortunately i too much shocked about your services and managment.first of all the food was not delicious as further the bed sheet cover was not cleaned whenever i attended my meeting your net service was slowed down and creat a trouble .am not attend my meeting easily its really embressment for me and my staff .i really dissatisfied of your staff i complain again and again about net service issues but no body took a serious notes even including your manger .i would like to says that please pay attention of your hotel services and staff behaviour and make professional employer.i hope so you should take a notice on my complain and improve your food quality and internet service .

Your,s sincerely

Sana.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

service: 4

meeting: 3

about: 3

hotel: 3

services: 3

staff: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by clearly stating the reason for the complaint and outlining the specific issues encountered. The letter could be improved by providing more specific details about the meeting and the impact of the issues on the meeting.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the ideas are not presented in a logical order. The numerous grammatical errors further hinder the coherence and cohesion of the letter.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations. The letter could be improved by using more precise and sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and punctuation. These errors significantly affect the clarity and readability of the letter.

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