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Band 5+: Write a letter to your friend who lives in a different country about your plan to work overseas. In your letter explain: What jobs do you plan to do Why do you want to work overseas- Ask for some information related to jobs, such as salary, working hours and so on-

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Dear Tom,

Hope this letter finds you well. I’m really missing our last meetup and going crazy to meet you soon. Well, an exciting news, I am also embarking on a journey in Canada because I am aspiring to work overseas.

I wanted to let you know about jobs I am planning to do. As you know me since teenage, I was always into high rise structures, so I will be searching for job as a structural engineer in Canada.

Nobody better knows about poor job prospects in Pakistan than you, as you couldn’t make ends meet here 5 years before. Walking on your footsteps, I am also moving to Canada for higher bucks, good quality of life, and better job security.

Oh, before I forget, what do you suggest about job market in construction sector? Also, what is annual salary of a structural engineer? I also heard that various medical benefits are offered to employees.

I really wish that I get a job there so we can frequently plan our meet ups.

Warm regards,

Saqib

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task well, covering all the required points. However, the writer could have provided more details about their plans and expectations from working overseas.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow. The writer uses cohesive devices effectively, but could improve by using more varied and sophisticated linking words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

The writer uses a range of vocabulary, but could improve by using more precise and nuanced words. Some phrases, such as 'going crazy to meet you soon', are informal and could be rephrased for a more formal tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The writer demonstrates a good range of sentence structures and grammatical accuracy. However, there are some minor errors, such as the use of 'as you know me since teenage' instead of 'as you've known me since teenage'.

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