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Band 6+: Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country. b. Describe the public event. c. explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

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Hi Jeet,

How have you been since we last met?

I thought you would love to join the concert of Bruno Mars at BC Place, which is happening on April 15th, 2026.

The concert night will bein Vancouver, in my hometown. Which is 20 Minutes commute from my place. The event starts at 7 PM and will last till 10 PM. Dinner is included in the tickets, a dance floor, and even a little bonfire in certain areas of the stadium, which will allow people to enjoy the concert in the cold evening. With a beautiful sunset, the concert will look incredible. They even have alcolohol free upto 2 glasses per head and a lot more. It feels like it’s not just the concert but a whole event where people can relax and enjoy the evening and release their stress for the week. On top of that, there will be firework show scheduled in the last 20 minutes of the event, which I am sure you will love it!

While you are over, we will be able to do a trip to Banff, Alberta. A road trip to Banff is actually good, it is pretty looking at the sights and roads passing through rockey mountains of Alberta. I have been there once, and I am pretty sure you would love it too.

I really hope you will be able to come over. And we can enjoy for a month.

Hope to hear back from you

Dhruv

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

concert: 5

which: 4

event: 3

enjoy: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, including inviting the friend, describing the event, and explaining other plans. The details are relevant and sufficient. There are a few minor lapses in formality and some grammatical errors, but they do not significantly detract from the overall quality of the response. To improve, focus on maintaining a consistently friendly yet appropriate tone and proofread carefully for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. For example, in the second paragraph, the transition between describing the concert and mentioning the bonfire could be clearer. Also, the transition to the plans in Banff could be smoother. Consider using transitional phrases to connect ideas and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, and the tone is friendly and inviting. However, there's room to enhance the letter with more varied and descriptive language, especially when describing the concert and the trip to Banff. For instance, instead of 'pretty looking at the sights,' you could use more vivid descriptions to capture the beauty of the Rocky Mountains. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'will bein Vancouver' should be 'will be in Vancouver,' and 'alcolohol free upto 2 glasses per head' needs rephrasing for better clarity and correctness. Pay closer attention to verb tense consistency, correct spelling, and sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy.

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