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Band 9: Write a letter to your manager about to attend public speaking

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to bring to your attention my interest in giving a speech to current students who are expected to graduate next year. Although I may not have extensive experience in public speaking, I am eager to share my knowledge on building a professional career.

Currently, I am employed as an Assistant Regional Manager in my company. After completing my graduation, I faced many challenges to reach my current position. Nowadays, students often miss opportunities to gather essential information on building a strong social network. I believe my talk would be valuable for students who aim to develop a professional career. Additionally, they would gain insight into the challenges employees often face, helping them to shape their skills to overcome these challenges.

I would be available next Saturday to discuss my journey with students at the community auditorium.

I look forward to your reply regarding any changes to the schedule in the coming week.

Yours faithfully,

Irfan

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