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Band 4+: Write a letter to your teacher Thanks your teacher and why did you left What was interested about those classes

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Dear Madam,

I have been intending to contact you on several occasions but unfortunately my extremely busy schedule has always been a hindrance.Now putting aside all my commitments, I am writing this letter you because I am very thankful to you for your good behaviour and your teaching style is very different easy and simple.I am very empress for your attitude.thank you so much for your guidance.I learnt so many things from you.

I have been taken admission to foreign college to improve my English language.Now my tasks is complete and I have no more time to stay here and I leave the England and return to my home town.

When I take admission in your institution I am very depressed because I don’t know how I speak the advance taknology but when I reached there the teacher is very helpful and good behaviour.I am very happy those classes and I fulfill my aim.

I hope you will consider my above mentioned concerns regarding the view.I have mentioned above. Curiously hope to encounter you.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Thank you for your time.

Your obdentely,

Hina Faizan

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of leaving could be clearer and more concise. The reasons for appreciation are present but could be more detailed and impactful.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and some unclear phrasing. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but more precise and sophisticated word choices would improve the overall impact and demonstrate a wider range of expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the clarity and overall quality of the letter. Improved accuracy and a wider range of grammatical structures are needed.

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