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Band 5+: Write an email to reply to an offer letter .

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Hi Dan

I am glad to hear that you and your family are doing well. Congratulation on you daughter’s birthday and your son’s graduation.

Thank you so much for this offer of employment, I really appreciate it.

As you know the PRA process has speeded up in the last week. As a result, I have received a lot of information and papers to sign in the last few days, so I will be working on all of these and will sent back to you the offer of employment letter signed tomorrow afternoon as later.

Taking into account the information that you have provided in regards the contract and duties, I will choose the New to Practice contract model, and at the beggining I will focus in getting adaptation to the primary care clinic and working on booked appointments, at any time later I could consider to accept the hospital privileges.

Regarding the panel of patients, I think it is more convenient to inherite the panel from Dr. Goodall and other physicians, and follow the transitiining process as you have mplemented it previously.

I am so enthusiastic by this new experience of life, so I will be visiting the Seewatch Medical Clinic by September. So I will timely confirm you my arrival there so that we can arrange a meeting.

Thank you for your support and kindness, it is very appreciated.

Warm regards,

Lina

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses the task by accepting the job offer and providing relevant details. However, some aspects could be more professionally structured.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's flow is generally understandable, but the inclusion of personal details and the somewhat disorganized structure slightly detract from the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and formal for a professional context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and professionalism. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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