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Band 6+: Write to the course organiser to give your feedback. In your letter Give details of the course Say what you like or dislike Suggest some improvement to the course.

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Dear Wang,

I am Ching-Yi, who attended your english course last Friday. I am writing this letter to give you my feedback about the course.

Firstly, I appreciate that you spent plenty of times organizing this and make it successful completely. It was an impressing class. Your presentation used a lot of the visual photos related to the new vocabularies to strengthen our memories. Until now, I still remember several words. However, there is a small issue that I want to tell you. Due to the limited space, sometimes students’ voice are louder than yours, and it is hard for me to hear from you. Even though you held the micrphone to speak, the quality of the speaker was not as good as I thought. It made me miss some parts of the course. Therefore, I hope you can improve the equipment to provide better educated environment. Overall, it was a wonderful class that I would like to join it again.

Best wishes,

Ching-Yi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by providing details of the course, expressing likes and dislikes, and suggesting an improvement. The purpose is clear and the tone is polite. However, there are some minor lapses in clarity and detail. For instance, the course details could be more specific (e.g., the subject, duration, or content). Additionally, the suggestion for improvement is somewhat vague; it could be more concrete, such as recommending a specific type of equipment or a solution to the sound issue. Overall, the response is relevant and sufficient, but a few enhancements would make it more comprehensive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, some sentences are awkwardly phrased, and the flow is occasionally disrupted by grammatical errors (e.g., 'make it successful completely', 'students' voice are louder'). The use of cohesive devices is basic but adequate. To improve, focus on smoother transitions between ideas and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at sophistication (e.g., 'strengthen our memories', 'provide better educated environment'). However, there are inaccuracies and awkward collocations (e.g., 'impressing class' should be 'impressive class', 'plenty of times' should be 'plenty of time', 'micrphone' misspelled). To improve, use more precise and natural vocabulary, and proofread for word choice and spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('students' voice are'), incorrect verb forms ('make it successful' should be 'made it successful'), and article usage ('an english course' should be 'an English course'). The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures and review common grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

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