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Band 4+: Writing task 1 (a report) The chart below provides information about weekly hours worked by Australian men and women in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart titled 'Weekly hours worked by men and women in Australia', comparing the percentage of each gender across different weekly hour brackets. For the 0-10 hours category, the percentages are men 4% and women 6%. In the 11-14 hours range, men account for 6% and women 8%. For 15-19 hours, the figures are 10% for men and 13% for women. The 20-29 hours bracket shows 25% for men and 15% for women. For 30-39 hours, men are at 20% and women at 12%. Finally, in the 40+ hours category, the percentages are 17% for men and 11% for women.

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The bar chart illustrated information about men and women who works different number of week per hours in 2012. It has six different categories of working period starting with 0-10 in Australia.

Overall we can clearly seen that till 19 hours womans are working more than mens on the other hand on above 20 hours men are working more then woman.

To begin with, the hours working categories u percent mens are working on 0-10 hours while the time period 11-19 hours at this ratio section does increasing 10 percent men are working on 15-19 hours on weekly base moreover the highest working section is 20-29 hours per week around 26% men are working above 40 hours 19% mens are working.

Moreover, the lowest working categories 6% womans are working on 0-10 hours and then this trend will increasing till 20-29 hours securnly 8% and 13% while the biggest weekly categorie is 20-29 hours around 13% womans are working above 40% therefore 11% womans are working more then 40 hours on weekly bases.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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hours: 13

working: 12

womans: 4

categories: 3

above: 3

weekly: 3

20-29: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the information about weekly hours worked by Australian men and women in 2012. However, there are some issues with organization, clarity, and accuracy. The language used is not always precise, and there are grammatical errors. To improve, focus on using more accurate data, clearer language, and better organization. Also, ensure that the grammar is correct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to abrupt transitions and a lack of cohesive devices. Consider organizing the information into more structured paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and create a smoother narrative.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. Expand your vocabulary related to describing charts and trends. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'working more,' try 'exceeding,' 'surpassing,' or 'outstripping.' Also, use more specific terms to describe the categories and percentages.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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