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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You have recently moved to a new neighborhood and would like to join a sports center there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, membership, costs etc.

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Dear Sir

I am writing to get some information about the “Friendship” fitness club that you manage in the center of Kuva town. In fact, I am a newcomer here and as an office worker I have to sit whole day long opposite the computer. So avoiding from the problems on my back that occurred from long time sitting is very crucial.

I have searched for the internet to find a suitable club for my busy timetable. I have seen the items from the images on your web page that helps to exercise my spine and release pain on my back. As well as this, it is open at 10 pm in the evening, it gives me a chance to go in for even I finish my work late. These training facilities inspired me to join your club.

I wonder that what kind of opportunities will be provided and whether a medicine check-up is required for membership and how much it costs for a month. Another point that I went the gym at the weekends in my previous living area, so I need to know that is possible at your club too

I hope you will respond to my requirements as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely

Tom

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The purpose is clear, and all the necessary information is included. Minor improvements in clarity and structure could elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some sentences lack conciseness and precision, slightly impacting the flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. While the range is sufficient, more precise and sophisticated language could be employed to demonstrate a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

There are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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