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Band 5+: Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ......,

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Dear Parminder,

Hor are you? Hope you are doing well. Actually I decided to do my further study in Canada and after study I will come back my country and I will start my own business. As you know I have done my previous study in medical and my plans are to be a doctor but now I need part-time job as I have a financial problem. I want to earn money for my tuition fee and for living expenses in foreign.

Fortunately, I remember you are also in living in Canada and I’m requesting you to find part-time job for me if it’s possible. Just to let you know I have good cooking skills, if there is any job in restaurants. Moreover, you can suggest me the sites for job and I can apply online as well.

Thank you & warm regards

Harman

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and organized for a higher score. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow and organization could be improved. Grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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