Bar Chart

Band 4+: Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company's total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying the percentage breakdown of a drug company's sales across three regions from 2002 to 2006. In 2002, America accounted for 41%, Europe 34%, and Asia 25%. In 2003, America held 35%, Europe 35%, and Asia 30%. In 2004, sales were distributed as 27% in America, 38% in Europe, and 35% in Asia. For 2005, the shares were 29% America, 34% Europe, and 37% Asia. Finally, in 2006, America contributed 30%, Europe 30%, and Asia 40% to the total sales.

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The chart below illustrates the amount of purchesing from a medical company in America,Eruope,and Asia.

Asia showed an upword trend from 2002 to 2006. While America showed an orderly declined rate till 2006.

In 2002, America manifested a high precentage in sale more than 40%. While both Eruope and Asia reached less than that. In the following years, America dramatically started to falling back in 2003,2004,2005, and 2006 , respectively. Eruope in the other hand showed a fluctuated presentages throw these years, however she recorded the high presentage inly in 2004 which reaches 38%. Then gradually pulled back in 2006.

On the other hand, Asia, recorded the least presentage in 2002, then rose significantly to record the high presentage in 2006 where she reached 40%.If we compared the three regions together, we can noticed that while America spiked a higher presentages in the first 2 years, Asia resurged and took the higher rates in 2006.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

america: 4

showed: 3

while: 3

years: 3

presentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends of the chart, such as the upward trend in Asia and the decline in America. However, the task achievement is limited by several issues. There is a lack of specific data points (percentages) to support the descriptions, which is essential for a high-scoring Task 1 report. Additionally, the overview is somewhat repetitive, and the comparisons could be more effectively integrated. To improve, ensure you include specific figures from the chart to substantiate your claims and focus on using more precise academic vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices like 'On the other hand' and 'In the following years,' they are not always used effectively to link ideas smoothly. To improve, focus on using a variety of linking words to connect sentences logically and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Avoid starting sentences with 'While' in a way that creates fragments; instead, connect the contrasting ideas into a single, complete sentence.

Lexical Resource

There is a limited range of vocabulary, and several words are used incorrectly or misspelled (e.g., 'purchesing', 'Eruope', 'upword', 'presentage', 'throw'). There is also some inappropriate use of personification, such as referring to regions as 'she'. To improve, work on your spelling accuracy and learn the correct collocations for describing trends (e.g., 'showed an upward trend' instead of 'showed an upword trend'). Aim to use more precise academic vocabulary to describe changes, such as 'fluctuated,' 'declined,' or 'increased steadily.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are issues with sentence structure (fragments), verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'America dramatically started to falling back'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with spacing after commas. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions correctly and ensure that your verb forms (infinitive vs. gerund) are used accurately. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures before attempting more complex ones.

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