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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two maps comparing Norbiton industrial area now and its planned future development. Currently, the map features a circular road connecting to the main road with two arms extending east, leading to six rectangular structures indicating factories. There is a road leading south with more factories. The planned future development map replaces some factories with residential housing in rectangular forms along the circular road extensions. It introduces a playground south of the roundabout, along with housing and a school to the northeast. A new street runs north from the roundabout, indicating additional housing on its east. The southern road now leads to a new housing area.

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The maps illustrate how a Norbition industrial area is currently laid out and how it is planned in the future.

Overall,the city is expected significantly development.In future introduction will new facilities and development in area.

At present,the area has a relatively simple layout.At the moment laid out to centre has a several houses which started in centre and ended east.In north there is a long road and in west around with this road has town.In the future Norbition industrial area will be significantly transformed.This road will be replaced and for centre road add new details for increasing park.Around central houses will be build 2 new facilities.Playground in the east will be constructed and near them will be build school.In the future the area will be considerably transformed,for children will open school and around school will be playground and new several houses.Medicine centre and shop will be add in the south laid out centre road

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and lacks specific details. The organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing more precise descriptions of the changes, using accurate vocabulary, and ensuring grammatical correctness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the changes and comparisons between the two maps. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of specific vocabulary related to map descriptions and urban planning. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the changes and features shown in the maps. For example, use words like 'demolished,' 'constructed,' 'redeveloped,' etc.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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