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Band 4+: You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear sir or madam

I am writing this letter with great satisfaction about your restaurant food and service.lt is really pleasurable for us.

Recently l completed my graduation with flying clours for this reason my friend wanted to treat for me.However one of my friend suggested your restaurant.

I was so excited about my result and also l get my visa for higher study in canada.so that l want to celebration both together.l invited all of my College friend in order to celebrate my success. The restaurant atmosphere was very suitable and decoration was sophisticated. We are enjoyed a lot

The food quality and service was really satisfied.Every food was lip smacking which me and my friends enjoyed a lot.Every waiters was so friendly and they serve every food according to our preference. The range of cuisine item really pleasurable.Everything was hygienic and tidy

Again thank you for your satisfied service

Yours faithfully

Toma

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

really: 3

friend: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by providing details of the visit to the restaurant, explaining the reason for the celebration, and mentioning what was good about the food and service. However, there are some minor deviations from the task, such as not specifying the name of the restaurant or the date of the visit. To improve, ensure all aspects of the task are covered in detail.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. Try to separate the introduction, body, and conclusion more clearly. Additionally, work on transitioning between ideas more smoothly to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words are repetitive, and there are instances of awkward phrasing. Try to vary your vocabulary more and use expressions more naturally. Additionally, pay attention to word choice to convey your ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors, such as missing articles, incorrect verb tenses, and punctuation mistakes. Proofreading for these errors and working on sentence structure variety will enhance your score in this criterion.

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