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Band 6+: You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is orginising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter offer to make a popular dish from your country, describe what this dish is, explain why it should be included in the event

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Dear Luis,

I am Jacob, a member of the Richard Global Pupil Club, Brisbane with registration number 201536. I am writing to show my willingness to include my protein mango cake dish into the upcoming event based on popular foods of numerous nations.

As you are the organiser of the event, I would like to participate in baking a protein-added mango cake. Primarily, it is one of the most popular dishes in my nation and particularly most of the bodybuilders and fitness trainers suggest it to their trainees.

This dish contains ingredients like Alphonso mango, which is known as the king of fruits, Muscletech iso protein 3000 and some natural sweeteners. Moreover, this cake will surprise everyone as no other dish can beat it in its crunchy taste and the inner layers of dry fruits will leave a long-lasting impact on people.

I think this dish can be presented at this event as it is a cost-effective traditionally cooker-based Indian dish which anyone can prepare at home. Additionally, I am the only candidate to represent my country so it will be a great opportunity for me if you allow me to serve my dish.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Jacob Brown

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

mango: 3

event: 3

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Task Response

7

The task is mostly addressed; however, the letter could be improved by more clearly highlighting the dish's popularity and cultural significance.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter is generally coherent, but some improvements in the flow and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but more precise and sophisticated word choices could elevate the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the grammar is mostly accurate, some minor errors affect the overall fluency and precision. Improving grammatical accuracy will enhance the overall score.

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