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Band 5+: You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:- - What activities you have planned - When the first meeting takes place and where

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Dear Sir,

My name is Margi Pancholi, a social worker from the Earth Organization. I am writing to ask about publishing our next social activity information in a local newspaper.

I have planned some special activities which will be beneficial for not only humans but also for the environment. Such as labeling and colouring different garbage bins and placing them over every alternate street. I am going to give a demo on the benefits of collecting the same material waste in one bin, for example plastic and glass. In addition, improving medical services, new medical infrastructure and agriculture are other points in the discussion. At the end of the day, they have planned a quiz for every one, the winner will receive the first free medical check up.

The first meeting takes place at our local sports stadium, near the new over bridge, which will be held on June 5th on World Environment day. Also, the timings for social meetings are from 4pm to 8pm.

Please feel free to contact me on -5558896

I look forward to hearing from you.

Thanking you

Yours faithfully,

Margi Pancholi

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

social: 3

medical: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing information about the planned activities, date, time, and location of the first meeting. However, it could benefit from a clearer focus on the social aspect of the meetings and a more concise presentation of the planned activities.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, and the connection between certain ideas isn't always clear. Better paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6

The letter demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated. More varied and precise language would strengthen the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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