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Band 6+: You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibility to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview

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Hello Rana,

My name is deep (passed out in 2013, Bluegill University), and I am a volunteer conducting informal interviews for University. You have been registered in the system and i am writing to you to schedule an interview with you.

The alumni interview would be relaxed, informal conversation where you can tell me something about yourself and i can answer any questions about the university or courses. This interview is optional and if you wish to cancel it, just let me know.

Ideally, we should talk sometime in the next two weeks. I am usually free during weekends, would January 8th and 9th work for you? If not, we can also connect the weekend after, January 17th or 18th. It will also have to be a remote interview. Can we skype? I can also reach out to you on your phone if that’s more convenient for you.

Looking forward to hearing from you, and thank you for your interest in Bluegill University.

Best wishes,

Deep.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements could be made to enhance clarity and professionalism.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some grammatical errors and slightly informal tone affect the overall flow and cohesion.

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6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices could enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter conveys the message, several grammatical errors and inconsistencies affect the overall accuracy and range of grammatical structures used.

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