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Band 9: You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letteer to a former teacher. In your letter •give details of the job •explain why it is important for you •suggest what information your teacher could put in the referenc

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Dear Salvador,

I am writing to request a favor from you for a job application where I am required to provide a reference.

I am seeking a position as a fitness instructor at the YMCA Club in Toronto. I have been selected for this role, which meets my expectations and fulfills my dream. This job is full-time and offers numerous benefits.

During my college internship, my goal was to work at the YMCA Club because my friend worked there and always spoke highly of the benefits and satisfaction he experienced while working there. His words left a lasting impression on me, prompting me to aim for a future role at the YMCA. After three years in the field, I have finally obtained this opportunity.

Based on our past interactions, you are the ideal person to provide me with a reference as you have known me since the first day of college. It would be greatly appreciated if you could highlight my knowledge of the fitness industry, dedication to work, and customer service skills in your reference.

I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Pooja

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Overall Band Score

9

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

9

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear details about the job, explaining its importance to the writer, and suggesting specific information for the reference.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter flows smoothly and logically, with clear transitions between paragraphs. The ideas are presented in a coherent and cohesive manner.

Lexical Resource

9

The letter demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary, used accurately and appropriately. The language is sophisticated and natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter is grammatically accurate and uses a variety of sentence structures effectively. Punctuation is used correctly throughout.

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