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Band 4+: You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter, state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions would you like him to take

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Dear Teacher,

Greetings of the day,

My name is Palash Roy, roll number 543321, student of 6 month diploma course of Simple Cooking Technique 2021 fall batch.

I woulk like to inform you few points which i found differences than admission brochure.

1. It was mentioned that there will be 4 practical classes and 2 theory class every week. which is not happening. Insteed there is only 3 practical and 1 theory class is happening.

2. From the Colleage student should get uniform which was paid at the time of admission but we have not received anything yet.

3. Also to highlightfor practical class student should get set of knife which was mentioned earlier but on actual nothing received till date.

So, therefore i would like to request you,kindly look into the matter very seriously at first priority as we have already completed a month of 6 months course. As a student it will be great if you could visit our practical class, so that you can see things by your own.

Yours Faithfully,

Palash Roy

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

student: 4

which: 4

practical: 4

class: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task by stating the course enrolled in, providing details about the noted differences, and suggesting actions to be taken. However, there are some inaccuracies and missing information that could have been included for a more thorough response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are issues with paragraphing and organization. Some ideas are presented in a disjointed manner, affecting the overall flow of the letter. Transition words could be used more effectively to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a need for improvement in lexical resource. While the letter conveys the message, there are several errors in spelling, word choice, and sentence structure. Using a wider range of vocabulary and more precise language would enhance the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range and accuracy are decent, but there are noticeable errors in punctuation, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. More complex sentence structures and accurate use of grammar would elevate the score in this criterion.

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