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Band 8+: you are going to another country to study you would like to do part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. wrie a letter to this friend give details of your study plans esplain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Zoya,

I hope you are doing well. It has been two months since I moved to Canada to pursue my studies in Human Resources Management. My course is going smoothly, and I am gradually adjusting to the new environment and academic schedule

However, living in Canada is quite expesive, and I also need to save money to pay my tuition fees. Since I attend classes from morning until afternoon, I am available to work in the evening or on weekends. Therefore, I am looking for a part-time job to manage my daily expenses independently.

As you are working as a manager at Walmart, I was wondering if you could inform me about any job available there. If there are no vacancies, you could ask your collegues or friends for suitable opportunities.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours lovingly,

Mubeen

Word Count: 143

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The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant details about the study plans, the need for a part-time job, and suggestions for how the friend can help. The information is presented clearly and sufficiently. To further enhance the response, consider adding a bit more detail to each point. For example, you could briefly mention specific modules you are studying or the amount you need to save for tuition. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the transitions between ideas are smooth. The purpose of the letter is immediately clear, and each point is developed adequately. Overall, the letter demonstrates a strong command of coherence and cohesion.

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used appropriately throughout the letter, contributing to its clarity and readability. The minor errors do not detract from the overall quality of the writing.

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