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Band 5+: you are going to another country to study you would like to do part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. wrie a letter to this friend give details of your study plans esplain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Nataly

I am writing you in regards to requesting some support with my broader-study in Australia, specificly is in relation to my wish to get a part-time job. As I told you before, I presented an exam to get a scholarship on Massachusetts university for the degree in biligualism. Two weeks ago I received the results and approved it, surf on the sergine engine I find details related to the new curricula such as the schedule, it has 8 semesters, and the full price of each semester is around 1’500.000, which is a litter higher than I was thought.

The scholachip only cover 20% percent of this amount and for reduced It more, and make it more accessible and comfortable for my pocked and mental health, I want to get a part-time job as English teacher in a public school if is possible. This income will cover my materials, transport, utility bills, rent food and leisure activities and most important I can help to my grad-ma with her medicines.

I know that you are coordinator of the Panamerican school since 3 years ago, So I was thinking whether you can recommend me in your school or others colleagues. I am available on morning until 1 pm and I knowledge on the teaching idioms with disability poblation and adults. If you need my curricula vitae, please don’t hesitate to write me and I will send you by email.

I hope your good news, and I looking for your response.

Your faithful,

Dani

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

6
The letter adequately covers the task requirements, providing details of study plans, explaining the need for a part-time job, and suggesting how the friend can help. There are some minor lapses in clarity and coherence, such as the reference to 'broader-study' and some awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on ensuring clarity and naturalness in your language use. Also, pay attention to accurately conveying information, for example, the university name and scholarship details.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter generally addresses the task, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the letter with clear paragraphs dedicated to each point mentioned in the task: study plans, reasons for wanting a part-time job, and how the friend can help. This will enhance the letter's clarity and coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For instance, instead of 'broader-study,' you could use 'further studies' or 'my studies.' Using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary will improve the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of prepositions. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors. For example, 'I am writing you in regards to' should be 'I am writing to you regarding'.

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