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Band 5+: you are going to another country to study you would like to do part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. wrie a letter to this friend give details of your study plans esplain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Wanti,

Hope you finds this letter well,

I am writing this letter to you because i know right now you are living in Sydney. Thankfully iu have passed my test for my bachelor’s degree in Canberra Univerity next year, and I wiill get my scholarship for 2 years. I’m thinking about my cost living there during my education program,as you know my financial status is not able to cover my cost living there which very expensive from our country. So i really need your help to promote me to your connection if i could get the job in Sydney once i live there. I believe you know me so well since we were working in the same company before. I really appreaciate your help and can’t wait to be reunite with you soon in Sydney. I’m waiitng for a good news from you. Thank you so much for your help.

Your best friend,

Yohana

Word Count: 155

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

living: 3

sydney: 3

there: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing details of the study plans, explaining the need for a part-time job, and suggesting how the friend can help. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language and proofread carefully for errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each of the points mentioned in the task: detailing study plans, explaining the need for a part-time job, and suggesting how your friend can help. This will enhance clarity and flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for conveying the message, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language. For example, instead of 'promote me to your connection,' you could say 'introduce me to your contacts' or 'recommend me to your network.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense agreement ('Hope you finds' should be 'Hope this letter finds you'), subject-verb agreement ('I wiill get' should be 'I will get'), and correct use of prepositions and articles. Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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