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Band 6+: You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: • explain what you need • say when you plan to be there • ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Dear Mr/Ms

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to ask about renting a holiday apartment in Singapore near Chinase village. I want to stay for a short holiday with my friend and I need a place to stay.

I plan to visit Singapore from 10 July to 15 July this year. I will come with my friend which we will visit with 10 persons that is 5 female and 5 male. We need a 2 huge apartment with two beds, a kitchen and a bathroom. It will be good if it is near the city center or close to public transport and near special chinese foods restaurant such as Hotpot and Duck Peking .

Can you please send me information about the prices for the apartment? I also want to know if there are any extra costs, like cleaning or deposit.

Thank you for your help.

Yours faithfully,

Agus Rinaldi

Word Count: 149

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The request is clear, and all necessary information is provided. Minor improvements in clarity and precision would elevate the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some organizational and structural issues slightly impede the flow. Improved paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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