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Band 4+: You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: • explain what you need • say when you plan to be there • ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Dear Mr/Ms

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request about going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.

Firstly, this holiday is so impotant for me. The first reason is that I regular wish go to Singapore and I am going to come in order to sign a contract.As a result, I am necessary a single flat for lia down to be there.

To be honestly, if I went to there but my cat is ill, as a result of which I used to decide to did not went the last week.However, the state changged soon and I completed my all work in two days. And, I may be in tree days in there, as a reasult of which if I was very happy I you could book the apartment or the hotel for me.

The bigest problem is price that some people said that the apartment is the most expensive in the Singapore but I hope good value for money.Then, if I was too greatful I you could get information about prices to me.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

John Mark.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

holiday: 3

singapore: 3

apartment: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by conveying the purpose of the request, the duration of stay, and the need for price information. However, it could benefit from a more concise and organized presentation of information.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's coherence is somewhat affected by the inclusion of unnecessary details and abrupt transitions between ideas. Improving the flow and logical sequencing of information would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The letter demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. More sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Significant improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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