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Band 5+: You are hosting a birthday party next weekend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Invite your friend to the party. Mention what activities you have planned. Suggest what they should bring.

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Dear tom

I hope you are doing well ,I am very excited to invite you to my younger bother’s brithday party. actually it will be a suprise party for that is host by me .i am looking forward to see you in party.

I will planning to setup same games for the party like muscial chair.truth and dare etc. we will also playing dj till the late night and for the dinner. I am plannig serve same maxican food that is healthy ,along with it i will serving same starters in the benning and for the i am thinking for same pizzas or pasta . i am planning to play music war as well with you can show you are singing talent to everyone.

I wish you coming into the party and can you bring same board games with you and bring alots of love and you best blessing with you for my little brother.

I am waiting to see you

you friend

todd

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

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The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and organization would enhance the response.

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The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

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Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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