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Band 4+: You are hosting a dinner party to celebrate your promotion at work and want to invite a colleague who has been supportive. Write a letter to invite them to the dinner. You should include details about: - the reason for celebration and why their presence is important - the date, time, and venue of the dinner - what they can expect or whether they need to bring anything.

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Dear mr.jhonson

I’m writing this letter for you with love and joy in my heart. Because believe it or not i’ve been promoted in my work as a accounatnt as you now obviously so in this matter i would like to take this opportunity and invite you to my dinner party on june 11th .6pm in brooklins wood and grill restaurent venue to celabrate together me and you because you my special one between all my colleagues because you’ve been there by my side throught the ups and down and always motivated me when i was upset or about to let go everything so i would like to accept this invitation and let’s celebrate for more and more success in the future and lastly i remembered that you captured some beautiful moments in work so if you can bring your sd card with you so we can show it to others and laugh it out.

I’m looking forward for your response

Yours faithfully

Abbes riad

Word Count: 165

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
because: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter appropriately addresses the task by including the reason for celebration, the date, time, and venue, and what the colleague should bring. The tone is warm and personal, which suits the context. However, there are some lapses in clarity and organization. For example, the sentence structure is occasionally confusing (e.g., 'I would like to accept this invitation' should be 'I would like you to accept this invitation'). Additionally, the letter could benefit from clearer paragraphing and more formal salutation and closing conventions (e.g., 'Dear Mr. Johnson' and 'Yours sincerely' for a named recipient). To improve, ensure each point is clearly separated into paragraphs, proofread for grammatical errors, and use standard letter format.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The message is difficult to follow due to run-on sentences and missing punctuation. Consider organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs: one for the reason and importance, one for the date/time/venue, and one for expectations. Use linking words like 'firstly', 'also', and 'finally' to improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with informal phrases like 'my special one' and 'laugh it out'. There are also spelling errors (e.g., 'accounatnt', 'celabrate', 'restaurent'). To improve, use a wider range of formal and precise vocabulary, such as 'celebrate this milestone', 'your unwavering support', and 'cherished memories'. Avoid overly emotional or colloquial language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, missing articles, and improper capitalization (e.g., 'i've', 'june 11th', 'mr.jhonson'). Sentence structures are often fragmented or run-on. Focus on using correct punctuation, capitalizing proper nouns, and forming complete sentences. Practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences with accurate grammar.

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