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Band 5+: You are organizing a potluck dinner for your book club members and want to invite each of them to participate. Write a letter to a member inviting them to the potluck dinner. You should include: - the theme of the dinner, if any - the date, time, and location of the dinner - what kind of dish they should bring to share, considering any dietary restrictions.

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Dear Mister and Madam,

This year has been passed and i hope you doing well through this year.

Since we had a last discuss around 2 month ago, i would like to having you in potluck dinner later. We would talk and discuss about your favorite book this year. We will have a time to sharing your favorite things on your book, so it would be great and fun. And for celebrate’s new year and Chrismast, we would have a red theme as a costume.

The dinner would be held at 7 p.m. Saturday night in the Sant Park at Willy Wonka st.

For the reason of this potluck dinner, we suggest you to bring some simple food or Snack for eight people, and if you don’t mind to bring a drinkes as well.

For the last, i’d thank to you and i would be delightful if i have you in potluck dinner.

Cheers,

Jean

Word Count: 155

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 6

potluck: 3

dinner: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting book club members to a potluck dinner and including details about the theme, time, location, and what to bring. However, the language contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detracts from the overall clarity. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate English, and ensure the tone is consistently friendly and inviting.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, clearly separate the introduction, details about the potluck, and the closing remarks into distinct paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words to make the invitation more engaging. For instance, instead of 'simple food,' you could suggest specific types of dishes that fit the potluck theme. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully before submitting would help catch these errors.

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