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Band 6+: You are organizing a potluck dinner for your book club members and want to invite each of them to participate. Write a letter to a member inviting them to the potluck dinner. You should include: - the theme of the dinner, if any - the date, time, and location of the dinner - what kind of dish they should bring to share, considering any dietary restrictions.

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Dear Friends,

Good day, I am writing this letter to formally invite you to have a potluck dinner together with out classmate friends. The theme would probably be Pajama Party, any color and design so we could all comfortable and enjoy the party. The gathering would be at solaires hotel room 202 , 27th floor Makati City at exactly 8pm in the evening. Please bring one side dish each, any food could do such as pasta, steak, alcohol beverages, fruits and sweets for desserts. We will have some fun activities and refreshments, and most importantly, a chance to strengthen our friendship and make happy memories together.It would mean a lot to have you all there so we can spend time together, talk, laugh, and enjoy each other’s company.

I really hope you can come. Please let me know if you are available. I’m looking forward to seeing you all soon.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing relevant details about the potluck dinner, including the theme, time, location, and dish to bring. There might be a few minor lapses in formality or detail, but overall, the response is well-organized and sufficiently informative. To improve, consider adding a more specific request for the type of side dish to avoid duplicates and enhance the overall flow and clarity of the invitation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter generally conveys the necessary information, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each key detail: the theme, the event specifics (date, time, location), and the dish request. This will enhance clarity. Also, avoid stating obvious information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more varied and descriptive language. For example, instead of 'any food could do,' you could suggest specific types of side dishes that align with the pajama party theme, or use more inviting language. Also, avoid using informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct tense usage. Proofread carefully to catch errors before submitting your work. For example, 'out classmate friends' should be 'our classmate friends,' and 'solaires hotel room 202 , 27th floor Makati City' needs better punctuation and structure.

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