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Band 6+: You are planning a family reunion and want to invite your relatives. Write a letter to your relatives inviting them to the reunion. You should include details about: - the history and importance of the family reunion - the location, date, and time - planned activities and accommodation details

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Dear Family,

I hope you are doing well. I am writting this letter to invite you to our family reunion, which is a special tradion for our family.We started these reunions many years ago to stay close, share memories, and spend time together.

This year, the reunion will take a place Wednesday 24th of December, starting at 14:00 p.m.

We are planning several activities such as: family lunch, games for children, a photo session and the tastiest dinner. There will also be space to talk with each other and relax. For those coming far away, and you want privite space, nearby hotels are awaible, but we also host in our house we have enoght space to accommodate everyone.

I really hope you can come. Please let me know if you are able to join us and we will have opportunity to spend time together as family.

Best wishes,

your sincerely,

Tom Stones

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

space: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing relevant details about the family reunion's history, location, date, time, planned activities, and accommodation. There are a few minor lapses in formality and detail, such as specifying the year of the reunion and providing more specific hotel information. Overall, the letter is well-written and effectively conveys the invitation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter generally conveys the necessary information, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each main point (history, location/time, activities/accommodation) to enhance clarity. The closing could be more engaging; instead of just stating you hope they can come, try ending with an enthusiastic invitation or a personal touch.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to use more varied and descriptive language. For example, instead of 'tastiest dinner,' you could describe the type of food or the atmosphere of the dinner. Using synonyms and more specific words will make the letter more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency ('writting' should be 'writing', 'take a place' should be 'take place'), subject-verb agreement, and correct spelling ('awaible' should be 'available', 'enoght' should be 'enough'). Proofreading carefully before submitting will help catch these errors. Also, avoid mixing formal and informal styles; for example, 'privite' should be 'private'.

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