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Band 4+: You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years. give your friend a brief update of your life since you were last in touch explain why you will be travelling to his/her town. say what you plan to do when you visit their town.

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The reason why, I am writting this letter is regarding.I will call on your motherland. Moreover, we have not met for a long time, therefore it is a great idea to visit there and enjoy a holiday together.

When we spoke 5 years ago before graduated colloge.After it, I entered military university in chirchik and finished there. Now, I have being military and I have working military base since 1 year.

The purpose of my visit, there are of lot of military historical places to learn information about history of army. In addition your city is the most modern town in our country with city malls, parks and five star luxury hotels Furthermore, I never go to your town, therefore some facilities need for me. Especially hotel for stay there from Monday till Sunday, low-price rent car for taravel sightseeing places.

To conclude, you take my opinion and you will make reservation good conditions for me, for our friendship.

Sincerely Davatbok

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
there: 4
military: 4
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Task Response

5.5
The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the information is not always clearly organized or expressed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter's organization and flow could be significantly improved. Numerous grammatical errors disrupt the coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is adequate, but more precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact. There is some inappropriate word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and understanding. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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