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Band 5+: You are planning a weekend camping trip with a group of friends. Write a letter to the manager of the campsite to make necessary arrangements. You should specify: - The dates you plan to camp - The number of tents you will need - Any specific facilities you require.

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Dear guys,

Hi guys, how have you been ? , I hope you are doing well. We didn’t hang out for a while and I think we should make some memories together in age 20, so I have a good idea ,Let go camping trip together !

Recently, I saw the reels from youtube video about the north mountain trip ,his name is Bear Grylls. He is well-known youtuber as a alone survival and camping jungle without any supplies, which he inspired me to go camping.

Our plan is we will hire the 4 wheel cars and going to the north mountain. The date will be on next month weekend from 28 march to 30 march. I do not think we can do like a him, so we need to prepare a bit of equipment and supplies including medical supplies and foods or water. Lastly we do not have any planned activities it will be on situations when we arrived because I think it more exciting for all of us.

Who interested to join with me please DM in to my Whatapp. I will looking forward to your response.

Best regard,

Patrick

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

think: 3

supplies: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but includes some irrelevant information (e.g., mentioning Bear Grylls). The location and dates are mentioned, and there's a general reference to equipment and supplies. However, the letter lacks specific details about what to bring and the planned activities are vague. To improve, provide a detailed list of necessary equipment and supplies, and suggest specific activities with cost estimates.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for clarity. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each of the points mentioned in the task: location and dates, equipment and supplies, and planned activities. This will help the reader follow your plan more easily. Also, avoid informal openings such as 'Dear guys' in formal letters.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and descriptive words related to camping and outdoor activities. For example, instead of 'foods or water,' you could list specific food items or types of water containers. Also, avoid informal language such as 'Let go camping trip together!' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'Who interested to join with me please DM in to my Whatapp' should be revised for better grammar.

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