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Band 5+: You are planning to hold a surprise birthday party for a close friend at a local restaurant. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. You should include details about: - the date and time you want to book the restaurant - the number of people attending - any special requests you have (e.g., decorations, menu).

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Dear The manager of Aoka’s restaurant

I glad to inform to you that I will book the restaurant for my friend birthday party which is will be hold at :

Date : 29, October 2022

Time : 08.00 pm – 12.00 pm

Number of people attending : 100

I request for the menu that divided into 3 parts, 1 Special cake is made from dark chocolate and strawberry Jam with written “Happy Birthday Lula, always be Happy”, 2 main course (Fried shrimp with mozzarella, Fried rice, chicken with Nashville cheese, wine, and ice cream), 3 dessert (pudding, risol mayo, taco, burger, and fried potatoes). For the decorations you can give some of funny stuff with pink and white color.

That is my request, I’m waiting for your answer you can email me at mahamah123@gmail.com for the further information.

Maha

Word Count: 139

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6
The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, providing details about the date, time, number of attendees, and special requests for the birthday party. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses in formality and clarity. To improve, focus on using more formal language and structuring the letter with clear paragraphs for each main point. Also, ensure that the menu requests are clearly and concisely presented. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect ideas and ensure a smoother reading experience. For example, you could start with a clear statement of purpose, then move into specific details about the booking, number of attendees, and special requests. Paragraphing could be used more effectively to separate different topics.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of 'funny stuff,' you could use more descriptive terms like 'balloons, streamers, and confetti.' Expanding your range of vocabulary would make the letter more engaging and effective.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I glad to inform to you' should be 'I am glad to inform you.' Proofreading carefully before submitting your writing can help catch these errors.

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