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Band 5+: You are planning to hold a surprise birthday party for a close friend at a local restaurant. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. - Explain the occasion and the purpose of the party. - Outline your requirements regarding the date, time, and number of guests. - Ask about available menu options and pricing.

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Dear Mr. Smith

I am writting you to enquire about reserving a private area in your restaurant to celebrate my close friends birthday party

We would like to celebrate our event on Monday 15th starting at 6 p.m. and finishing at 9 p.m. There will be approximately 15 guests

As a food , several of guests are not vegetarian but one of them is vegan and it would be better if your team coulg suggest this In addition we would have a birthday cake , served the end of our party. Please let me know we should bring a cake ourselves.

I would appreciate if you could organize our party in this date and indicate the final price.

Your sincerely

Samira

Word Count: 121

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, including the date, time, number of guests, and dietary requirements. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for errors. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction stating the purpose, followed by paragraphs detailing the date/time, guest count/dietary needs, and specific requests. A concluding paragraph summarizing your needs and expressing gratitude would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Using more precise and varied language could elevate the letter. For example, instead of 'As a food,' you could say 'Regarding dietary requirements.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses ('writting' should be 'writing'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors. For example, 'several of guests are not vegetarian' could be rephrased as 'most of the guests are not vegetarian'.

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