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Band 7+: You are planning to host a party at your apartment, but you are concerned about potentially disturbing your neighbors with noise. Write a letter to your neighbors to inform them about the party. In your letter, you should: - Explain the reason for the party - Tell them the date and time of the party - Apologize in advance for any inconvenience

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Dear Neighbor,

i hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to sincerely apologize for the disturbance caused by te party at my apartment last saturday evening.

The gathering was organized to celebrate my recent graduation, and a few close friends came over to mark the occasion. Unfortunately, the atmosphere became louder than i had anticipated. As the evening went on, there was music playing and guests talking loudly, and i deeply regret not realizing sooner how distruptive this must have been for you.

i fully understand that this noise may have interrupted your rest and comfort, and i take full responsibility for thw inconvenience caused. please accept my apologies for not managing the situation more responsibly.

to make up for this, i would be more than happy to compensate yo any reasonable way. I am willing to cover any inconvenience costs or treat you to a meal or small gift as a gesture of goodwill. I also assure you that I will be more mindful in the future and ensure that any gatherings end early and remain quiet.

Thank you very much for your understanding. I truly hope this incident will not affect our good neighborly relationship.

yours sincerely,

Nara

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Overall Band Score

7

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

9

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task. It provides a clear reason for the party, details what happened during the night, and offers a solution to compensate the neighbor. The tone is sincere and apologetic, and the letter maintains a formal register throughout. There are no significant omissions or lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter is well-organized and the message is easy to follow. Paragraphing is generally well-managed. To improve cohesion, consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly within and between paragraphs. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to indicate cause and effect, contrast, or addition.

Lexical Resource

6

A good range of vocabulary is used appropriately. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to apologizing and offering compensation. For example, instead of 'make up for this,' you could use 'rectify the situation' or 'atone for the disturbance.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, though there are a few errors. Pay close attention to spelling and proofread carefully to catch these mistakes. To improve grammatical range, try incorporating a wider variety of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses.

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