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Band 5+: You are planning to move to a new city for a job opportunity. Write a letter to your friend explaining your decision. You should include details about: - why you have decided to accept the job offer - what you will miss about your current city - how you plan to stay in touch and visit each other.

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For Dila

I hope this letter finds you well, next week i will move to Jakarta for a job opportunity, this job has been my desire for a long time, i will join to graphic designer. With my advantage skills i can get this opportunity. I’ve gonna doing this chance for my life.

For from now i still in Bandung. Bandung really a nice place. All foods in Food streets on Soekarno street really delicious and i’ve gonna miss that. Also the mountain we climb was great mountain ever. I will miss Bandung so much.

I will make a plan before moving. We are gonna remake our memories to the place we’ve visited. I’ve want make a vlog video for this momment. I hope i never forget this momment in my head. I hope you can accept this plan before i move. Thank you for everything in my life you always stay with me.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

gonna: 3

bandung: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail on the job opportunity, things the writer will miss, and plans to stay in touch. However, more detail and elaboration would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between ideas. Grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication and impact. Some lexical choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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