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Band 5+: You are planning to move to a new city for work and need to find accommodation. Write a letter to a local real estate agency. - Explain your situation and the type of accommodation you are looking for. - Describe your preferred location and budget. - Ask about their fees and the process for viewing properties.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire about your professional assistance in rental properties in your city. I have recently relocated to this city because of a new job opportunity and I am now seeking a suitable place to live. First of all, I would prefer a location in city centre, as it would be convenient for commuting to work and accessing to public trainsportation.

Regarding the type of accommodation, I am looking for a fully furnished one-bedroom apartment along with a balcony. My budget is approximately 800$ per month. I would appreciate it if you could send me some suitable options as soon as possible.

I looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Tri

Word Count: 118

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing clear reasons for moving, preferred location, and desired accommodation type. The information is relevant and sufficiently detailed. A minor improvement could be to elaborate slightly more on the reasons for preferring a fully furnished apartment or the importance of a balcony. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and the purpose is clear. However, the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. For example, in the second paragraph, consider using a phrase like 'In terms of location' to introduce the preferred area. Also, the final paragraph has a grammatical error that affects its clarity. Ensure each paragraph focuses on one key aspect of the task to improve organization.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, demonstrating a good range of words related to renting properties. Phrases like 'professional assistance in rental properties' and 'suitable options' are well-chosen. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific vocabulary related to apartment features or amenities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'accessing to public trainsportation' should be 'accessing public transportation,' and 'I looking forward' should be 'I am looking forward.' While a range of structures is attempted, accuracy needs improvement. Pay close attention to verb tenses, prepositions, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully can help catch these errors.

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