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Band 7+: You are planning to move to a new city for work and need to find accommodation. Write a letter to a local real estate agency. - Explain your situation and the type of accommodation you are looking for. - Describe your preferred location and budget. - Ask about their fees and the process for viewing properties.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to ask assistance to find me a rental accomadation to live in Cambridge. I am currently living in Toronto and I just got a new job in Cambridge Toyota plant as an engineer. However, the facility location is not familier for me and I don’t have any friends over there.So I want your company’s help to find me a perfect temporary accomadation.

Moreover, I am looking for a furnished apartment with attached kitchen and balcony. Additionally, it should be pet friendly and I a car parking spot. And my budget for the rent including utility should come under 1200 cad. One last thing if the apartment is closer to the facility that would be ideal.

I would really appreciate it if you can send me some options available to move end of this month. I have to start my job early next month. Also if you can send me a few pictures of units available now, that would be greatly appreciated.

I look forward to hearing back from you.

Your faithfully,

Jerin

Word Count: 177

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Overall Band Score

7
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter covers all the required points: type of property (furnished apartment with kitchen and balcony), preferred location (close to the Toyota plant in Cambridge), budget (under 1200 CAD), and move-in date (end of this month). The tone is appropriate and the purpose is clear. However, there are some lapses: the phrase 'I am writing to ask assistance to find me a rental accomadation' is awkward and contains a spelling error ('accomadation' should be 'accommodation'). Also, 'I a car parking spot' is a grammatical error. To improve, ensure correct spelling and grammar, and consider rephrasing for clarity, e.g., 'I am writing to ask for your assistance in finding rental accommodation.' Additionally, the closing 'Your faithfully' should be 'Yours faithfully'.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs and a logical flow. The purpose is evident from the start, and each paragraph addresses a specific point from the task. Cohesive devices like 'Moreover', 'Additionally', and 'One last thing' are used effectively, though some transitions could be more varied. Overall, the message is easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

7
A good range of vocabulary is used to convey the requirements, such as 'furnished apartment', 'pet friendly', and 'utility'. However, there are some spelling errors ('accomadation', 'familier') and minor inaccuracies ('I a car parking spot' instead of 'I need a car parking spot'). These do not significantly hinder understanding, but more precise and accurate word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The letter uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors. For example, 'I am writing to ask assistance' should be 'I am writing to ask for assistance', and 'I a car parking spot' is missing a verb. Punctuation is generally correct, but there are minor issues like missing spaces after periods. More attention to grammatical accuracy and proofreading would improve clarity.

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