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Band 4+: You are planning to move to a new city for work or study. You want to ask a friend who lives there for advice. Write a letter to your friend. - Explain why you are moving. - Ask for specific advice about finding accommodation. - Ask about social activities or places to meet people.

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Dear PARVINDER

I hope you doing well. I am writing this letter to you explain about my city.

I want to tell you about accommodation . There so many types accommodations available such as houses , apartment ,townhouse and so on . I want tell you houses are more convienent as compare to others .

Fortunately , there are many numbers options of places where you can have look fist then take decision as public park and near by the supermarkets etc .moreover you can visit the dealers and other online platform where you connect with sellers as well .

As you know that I have a job Monday to Friday .feel free to connect me on weekends and any day of the evenings . I always ready to help you as much as I can .

I hope you find accommodation as soon as possible .

Lots of love,

Parmila

Word Count: 151

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all three points in the task, providing advice on accommodation, suggesting places to visit, and offering help. There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, the sentences about accommodation and places to visit could be more specific and detailed. Also, the tone is generally friendly, but could be slightly more personal and enthusiastic to better suit a letter to a friend. To improve, focus on using more precise language and providing more concrete examples to make the advice more helpful.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, in the second paragraph, you could start with a sentence that clearly introduces the topic of accommodation before listing the types available. Also, ensure that each point you raise is fully developed with sufficient detail to guide your friend effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the range needed to fully address the task. Try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to accommodation and places to visit. For instance, instead of 'houses are more convenient,' you could suggest 'detached houses offer more privacy and space, which might be ideal if you're looking for a family home.' Also, use synonyms to avoid repetition and enhance the letter's appeal.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles (a, an, the). For example, 'I hope you doing well' should be 'I hope you are doing well,' and 'There so many types accommodations available' needs restructuring. Proofread carefully to catch these errors and consider using a grammar checker to help identify areas for improvement.

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