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Band 4+: You are planning to move to a new city for work or study. You want to ask a friend who lives there for advice. Write a letter to your friend. - Explain why you are moving. - Ask for specific advice about finding accommodation. - Ask about social activities or places to meet people.

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Dear, Davinderjit Singh.

I am writing a letter to inform you I move to your city regarding as a new job. You will help me finding accommodation where I can live there.

As you know that I had done my study form university. I look that kind of job which I deserved as per my profession. I work as a bank manager in Punjab international bank of India. Therefore, i am looking a flat or apartment.

Moreover, I would like to live in quiet place where, I can pay full concentration on my job work. I prefer village area which is located near to my job place and it is easy for me up and down on daily routine

Honestly, I will be prefer flat and house with all amenities such as electricity power, water supply, wi fi connection along with fully furnished even, these all kind of facilities under my budget. I will pay both first and last rent as well as.

I look forward to hearing from you soon with best response

Your sincerely, Jobanpreet Kaur.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter covers the requirements of the task, asking for help with accommodation, specifying the desired location and type of place. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate language, and ensure each sentence flows logically.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader. For example, you could start a new paragraph when transitioning from introducing your move to discussing your accommodation preferences. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there are opportunities to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'job,' try synonyms like 'employment' or 'position.' Also, consider using more descriptive language when discussing the amenities you desire in your accommodation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I move to your city regarding as a new job' should be rephrased for better accuracy and clarity. Proofreading carefully before submission can help identify and correct these errors.

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