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Band 5+: You are planning to move to a new city for work or study. You want to ask a friend who lives there for advice. Write a letter to your friend. - Explain why you are moving. - Ask for specific advice about finding accommodation. - Ask about social activities or places to meet people.

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Dear komal,

Hello, How are you? Hope you are doing great.

I am writing this letter to get your advice on moving to city for my further studies as you know in our village their is only school upto secondary. I want to persue my graduation in early childhood education from convent collage and from god gerace I got offer letter from Harbour university.

Moreover, I want to collect your experience on getting a place to live. Do I have to get place leefore I come from here? I can have home fast when I will reach over their. Adding to this, what things should I bring from my house. Furthermore, as you know I am passinate about meeting new people and making good friends to crack my loneliness. Please give me some good recommandations where I can get chances on meeting new humans festivals, night parties and social events.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. yours lovingly,

Aman.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, explaining the reason for moving, asking for specific advice on accommodation, and inquiring about social activities. There are a few minor lapses in formality and some grammatical errors, but overall the letter is clear and fulfills the prompt's requirements. To improve, focus on using more formal language where appropriate and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader. For example, you could start a new paragraph when transitioning from explaining your reasons for moving to asking for accommodation advice, and then another when asking about social activities. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('from god gerace' should be 'by God's grace', 'leefore' should be 'before', 'passinate' should be 'passionate', 'recommandations' should be 'recommendations'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more precise and appropriate for the context. For example, instead of 'getting a place to live,' you could use 'finding suitable accommodation.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'their is only school upto secondary' should be 'there is only a school up to secondary level', and 'I can have home fast when I will reach over their' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on using correct sentence structures, verb tenses, and prepositions. Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors.

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