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Band 5+: you are visting another town next month for a short break.Write a letter to the tourist information centre

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I am writing to inquire about some information about the tourist center.

Next month, on April 1, I will be visiting Luxor town in Egypt. I should tell you the details of my short trip and ask for some information about that town.

In addition to the duration of my visit, I am planning to spend the 5-day period of the weekend in Luxor. Accordingly, I have booked a train ticket for April 1 from Egypt to Luxor,and my return trip is scheduled to be on the fifth of May.

Please note that not only would these outdoor activities appeal to teenagers, but they could also attract the attention of young children. I will accompany my children with me to Luxur, and I am sure they will enjoy horseback riding. Thank you in advance for your prompt response.

Yours Faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by inquiring about information from the tourist information center regarding the visit to Luxor town. However, it lacks specific questions or requests for information, which could have enhanced the task response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the trip details and activities for children. Consider smoother transitions for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some words could be more precise or appropriate. Additionally, there are a few awkward phrases that could be improved for better lexical resource. Aim for more natural and sophisticated language use.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes throughout. Review the use of articles, verb tenses, and sentence structures for better accuracy.

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