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Band 5+: you are visting another town next month for a short break.Write a letter to the tourist information centre

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Dear sir or Madam

I am addressing this letter to you request information about your town for my short break.

Likely,I will stay your town two month the reason why I would like to be far away from hustle and bustle of city life I also like your town because there are a lot of lushly green spaces for organising picnic and having a rest.

Thirdly, it is also significant for me know about climate and location of your town and I kindly request you to provide hotel with opportunities included.

Lastly, is there any local events are going to happening if it occur I would be greatfull from you if you could inform that to me the reason why I really keen on attend local events and I know that it is the best chance to expore something new for myself and make a lot of unforgettable memories furthermore get to know new culture.

I hope you will take my words into your account I look forward to your response

All kind regards

Rasulova Mubina

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by requesting information relevant to a short break. However, the structure and clarity could be improved for better impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow are somewhat disjointed. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance readability and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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