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Band 4+: you are visting another town next month for a short break.Write a letter to the tourist information centre

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Dear Tourist Information Centre,

I am writing to request information about Luxor town in Egypt as I will be visiting there for a short break next month.

I will be arriving in Luxor on April 1 and staying for 5 days until May 5. I have already booked my train ticket for the trip.

I am travelling with my children who are looking forward to activities such as horseback riding. I would appreciate any details you can provide about family-friendly attractions in Luxor.

I am excited about this trip and would be grateful for your assistance. Thank you in advance for your help.

Yours faithfully,

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by requesting information about Luxor town for a short break next month. However, more specific details about the type of information needed could enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is coherent and easy to follow. The information is presented in a logical order. Paragraphing is appropriately used. To improve, consider linking ideas more smoothly between sentences.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but more sophisticated and varied vocabulary could be included to enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, some minor errors in word choice and expression are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of sentence structures are used, but there are some grammatical errors present, such as the incorrect date format 'May 5' should be 'May 5th'. Punctuation is generally accurate, but more complex structures could be incorporated for a higher score.

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