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Band 5+: You borrowed an item from a friend a while ago and have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. You should include details about: - apologizing for the delay - explaining the reason for the delay - suggesting a specific time when you can return the item

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Dear Melanie,

I am writing to appologize about what i have done, i promised you to return your book i borrowed 2 weeks after you gave me but now i haven’t returned it yet.

I have an urgent agenda since a week ago, and it made my family and i had to go to my grandpa’s house. Since at my grandpa’s house is hard to find internet, i couldn’t inform you before you asked me. Now it is been 3 weeks since the day you gave me that book, because of this problem you are getting a hard time to do your homework.

I realized this is my fault and I already contacted my neighbour to drop your book to your house today. Once again I am really sorry for this issue. I hope you will not think negatively about me.

Thank you so much for reading my letter.

Sincerely,

Della

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

since: 3

house: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three required points: it explains why the book hasn't been returned (urgent family trip to grandpa's house with limited internet), describes the condition of the book (implied to be fine as it's being returned), and states when and how it will be returned (today via neighbour). The tone is apologetic and appropriate for the context. However, there are minor omissions and lapses: the condition of the book is not explicitly stated, and the explanation could be clearer. To improve, explicitly mention the book's condition (e.g., 'The book is in good condition and undamaged') and ensure all details are fully covered. Additionally, proofread for spelling errors (e.g., 'appologize' should be 'apologize', 'i' should be 'I').

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with an opening, explanation, apology, and closing. However, the flow is somewhat disrupted by awkward phrasing and missing punctuation, such as run-on sentences. The paragraphing is basic but functional. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on one main idea. For example, separate the apology from the explanation of the delay.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks variety and sophistication. Words like 'urgent agenda' and 'hard time' are informal or slightly misused. Try using more precise terms, such as 'unexpected family commitment' instead of 'urgent agenda,' and 'inconvenience' instead of 'hard time.' Also, correct spelling errors like 'appologize' to 'apologize.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as 'i promised you to return' (should be 'I promised to return'), 'it made my family and i had to go' (should be 'it made my family and me go'), and 'it is been 3 weeks' (should be 'it has been 3 weeks'). Punctuation is inconsistent, with missing commas and incorrect capitalization. To improve, practice using past perfect tenses and ensure subject-verb agreement. Proofreading for basic errors would significantly enhance the letter.

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