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Band 5+: you feel that the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting. write a letter to the manager of the television.

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Dear Sir / Madam

Hope this message finds you well, I like to watch your channel at night. In last 2 months I noticed your night programs became poor and do not useful or entertaining. For example, in the sports news you do not show the videos of the goals you just inform us about the result only. The night movie show, you almost show old movies every night.

If you do not mind taking my opinion for suggested programs, people at night would like to watch a comedy show such as Mr. bean. Furthermore, show some primer league matches which mostly show at the weekends. Also, some talking show twice a week will be better to increase the knowledge for local and international situation.

More entertaining programs can help people to forget hole day pressure and change the mood for your watchers.

Siencerly Yours

Mohammed Taha

Word Count: 147

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

night: 4

programs: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by clearly stating the writer's dissatisfaction and offering suggestions for improvement. However, the suggestions could be more specific and persuasive. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and more cohesive transitions between ideas. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but the range is limited. More precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall impression. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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